You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings of the day! I am Harshali Mohite, I had an international

flight

today in the morning from India to

USA

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the USA

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which I missed due to an unfortunate event at the airport. I was

traveling

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travelling

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with a friend and suddenly at the

airport

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he got sick. I had to take him to the emergency room and from there the medical team at the airport and I had to shift him to the hospital due to his health condition.

This

unfortunate incident made me miss my

flight

which was not due to anyone's fault. I am a student in

USA

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the USA

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pursuing my

masters

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master's

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and It is very important for me to arrive

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USA

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the USA

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as my college has begun and missing classes will reflect badly on my grades. In

this

situation, I would appreciate

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it if

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you could help me get on another

flight

on 06/12/22. Please can you get me on a

flight

that has the same price as the previous

flight

that I missed as I do not have

finances

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the finances

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to spend on another

flight

ticket

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Awaiting

for

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apply

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your kind response and

thanking

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thank

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you in advance for looking into

this

matter. Best, Harshali

Submitted by harshaliamohite on Sat Jun 11 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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