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more and more young people use internet to socialize .do you think it is a negative trend or positive trend?

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I believe that the increasing number of young
people
 who are using
internet
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the internet
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 as a means of communication and socializing with their peers is detrimental to their psychological and physical health. Nowadays, young
people
 use social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram and Zoom to interact with their friends and families. As a matter of fact, the celebration of special
event
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 is virtually celebrated through Facebook live and as
such
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 no personal touch is being observed. They cannot see the real emotions of the person. When young
people
 cannot use the internet, they are prone to develop depression because they cannot express their feelings.
In addition
, young
people
 can be deceived by their peers in using the web because they don’t know them personally. The quality of a conversation using social media is awful because
people
 cannot sense the emotion or enthusiasm
from
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 the other person. It makes them
to
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wonder if they actually mean what they say. Young
people
 are spending so much time online that they do not always understand the feeling,
emotion
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emotions
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 and/or
character
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 of the person they are talking to.
Furthermore
, young
people
 are prone to develop obesity because of
lack
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 of activity.
Their
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all time
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 is devoted online using
the
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social media. They do not have the time to exercise as they are concentrated
in
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 socializing
via
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online with their friends. In conclusion, I am of the view that online socialization is not advisable for young
people
 as they need to personally in contact with their friends and family especially in celebrating special events and
face to face
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 interaction should be done.
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