Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, – Say when and where you will meet him/her – Explain where he/she will stay – Tell him/her about the other arrangements you made.

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Dear Ravi, I hope

this

letter finds you well and I am very excited to meet you soon at the YVR airport. I see that your's plane will be arrived at 9am. Since It is Sunday we may have huge traffic.

hence

, I will be waiting in the parking lot.

Therefore

, we can meet over there and I can

also

carry your baggage along with me. As you know, Vancouver downtown is the best place in Canada and I have booked your accommodation in the Westin hotel which is in the core downtown and very close to all required facilities.

In addition

, you can have a mesmerising view from your room as I requested the hotel manager to provide the best room in the hotel. I know you will be busy with your schedules throughout the day and I decided to provide a good lunch at the weekend. I

also

ordered a brand new phone which is much needed to talk with your family and friend during your free time. When you feel alone and boring please do not hesitate to call me for the company and I am sure we can have fun together during weekends. I cannot wait to see you anymore and I wish you all the best on your trip. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

217 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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