More and more people are eating healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

Over the past five ,decades a shift in eating patterns and

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has been observed leading to improvement in the

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of the general population.

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progress and what people could do in order to achieve

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. On one hand, increasing evidence has shown that poor diets and obesity are directly associated with worse

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outcomes.

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, diets rich in simple carbohydrates like white bread or sweets, and saturated fats like red meat, have been linked with cardiovascular disease and diabetes.

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, many studies have demonstrated a wide range of

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related to a healthy diet including

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incidence of heart disease and stroke.

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, different research studies have shown the

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of exercise not only for our body but

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for our brain.

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, people that are fitter are less frequently affected by mental

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disorders or dementia.

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, whilst the number of persons following a healthier lifestyle is increasing, there are still many people that find it difficult to compromise with these habits.

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problem could be tackled through two different strategies.

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, education is key when it comes to raising awareness about

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and,

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, learning about the

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of a healthy diet and physical activity should start at the schools.

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, it is understandable that older generations often find it difficult to change their lifelong eating and exercise habits, and for

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of the medical community to educate their patients and guide them in

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process. In conclusion, I believe that the increasing

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the remarkable

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secondary to healthy habits as well as the detrimental consequences associated with an unhealthy lifestyle have played a major role in the acceptance of these principles among the general population. Notwithstanding

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much more could be done for those who struggle to

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those patterns into their routine and education from early

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might make a meaningful difference.