You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear
Mr.
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William, I am John
Andreay
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Andrey
, a student
of
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Executive
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the Executive
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management
course
. I am writing to inform you that I am planning to leave
management
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course
shortly due to personal issues. I joined the
course
last
year to enhance my managerial skills. In fact, the program is so interesting and helpful to improve soft skills required as an officer
though
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several constraints led me to think of discontinuation of
course
. I was doing
part time
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job after study hours due to financial
problem
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problems
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. Recently, I got
other opportunity
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to work
for
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full time
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along with
ongoing
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committment
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commitment
. I would not able to justify the study and jobs together and
hence
decided to drop the
course
. I would
definately
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definitely
continue the
course
in future once I have some financial freedom. As of now I will fully focus on
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and try to help
family
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as much as I can. I would like you to favour me in my decision and notify the College
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the same. I am looking forward
for
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your as usual support.
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sincerely, Rama Mori
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