You wish to get enrolled in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but you haven’t received a reply yet. Write a letter to the college explaining your concern because the course will start in less than two months. You need to know if you can still get enrolled, and you also request more information about the course, including the cost.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kajol Dave. I am writing
this
letter to request you about the Diploma in a Computer Science
course
, Brisbane, Australia. I wrote you a letter three weeks ago (Application Number: 7856896) but have not received any response yet. I am interested to get enrolling in
this
course
in
this
course
in the winter semester, the admission
course
deadline is just two months away,
therefore
, I really want to know about the
course
information in the earliest way. Could you please write back to me with details about the
course
, particularly what subjects will cover, the duration of the
course
, fee structure, admission process and if possible, the
course
advisor’s contact details? Would you please
also
suggest to me any prerequisites for admission? I
also
would like to know that am I still eligible to register
in
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this
course
If it is too late for the submission? I would be pleased if you can respond back to me as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Kajol Dave
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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