The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
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The provided graphs illustrate the comparison between the
number
of mortalities caused by six diseases
in Someland in 1990 and the research
funding amount allocated to each disease.
From an overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen that most of
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diseases
which are AIDS, Leprosy, Tropical Add an article
the diseases
diseases
, Diarrhea and Malaria had the
medical Correct article usage
apply
research
funding at approximately 50 million
or above. However
, TB which had the highest number
of deaths had the least medical research
funding at approximately 25 million
.
The most striking feature of these graphs are
that AIDS which grabbed the Change the verb form
is
second
spot with the
death Correct article usage
a
number
around
0.3 Change preposition
of around
million
had the highest number
in medical funding research
approximately 170 million
.
Another interesting point is that Leprosy and Tropical diseases
had the
fairly similar Correct article usage
a
number
of approximately 80 million
when it comes to medical research
funding in Someland
. Correct your spelling
Homeland
However
, these two diseases
are not similar in the number
of deaths which were approximately at
0.1 and 0.4, respectively.Change preposition
apply
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