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The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
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The provided graphs illustrate the comparison between the
number
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 of mortalities caused by six
diseases
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 in Someland in 1990 and the
research
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 funding amount allocated to each disease. From an
overall
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 perspective, it can be clearly seen that most
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diseases
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the diseases
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 which are AIDS, Leprosy, Tropical
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, Diarrhea and Malaria had
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medical
research
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 funding at approximately 50
million
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 or above.
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, TB which had the highest
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 of deaths had the least medical
research
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 funding at approximately 25
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. The most striking feature of these graphs
are
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 that AIDS which grabbed the
second
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 spot with
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 death
number
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around
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 0.3
million
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 had the highest
number
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 in medical funding
research
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 approximately 170
million
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. Another interesting point is that Leprosy and Tropical
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 had
the
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a
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 fairly similar
number
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 of approximately 80
million
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 when it comes to medical
research
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 funding in
Someland
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Homeland
.
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, these two
diseases
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 are not similar in the
number
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 of deaths which were approximately
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0.1 and 0.4, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, diseases, research, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 5 times.
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