The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
The provided graphs illustrate the comparison between the
number
of mortalities caused by six
diseases
in Someland in 1990 and the
research
funding amount allocated to each disease. From an
overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen that most
of
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diseases
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the diseases
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which are AIDS, Leprosy, Tropical
diseases
, Diarrhea and Malaria had
the
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medical
research
funding at approximately 50
million
or above.
However
, TB which had the highest
number
of deaths had the least medical
research
funding at approximately 25
million
. The most striking feature of these graphs
are
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that AIDS which grabbed the
second
spot with
the
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a
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death
number
around
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0.3
million
had the highest
number
in medical funding
research
approximately 170
million
. Another interesting point is that Leprosy and Tropical
diseases
had
the
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fairly similar
number
of approximately 80
million
when it comes to medical
research
funding in
Someland
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Homeland
.
However
, these two
diseases
are not similar in the
number
of deaths which were approximately
at
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0.1 and 0.4, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, diseases, research, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 5 times.

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