You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter - Say what the participants liked about the hotel - Explain why they were unhappy about the food - Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to share with you my constructive feedback about an all-day meeting that took place for my company at your hotel.
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of all, I would like to echo the positive opinion of the visitors, as they passed out by the modern architecture of the hotel. They Linking Words
also
had a wonderful opportunity to see the beautiful scenery of the forests around the hotel during lunch.
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although
the guests were satisfied with the buildings and the scenery, they complained about the food they were served for dinner. Linking Words
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they were served a three-course meal, it lacked a soup and an appetiser. Apart from the fact that these were missing, the main course was cold and the dessert was not sweaty.
It follows that you should keep warm before serving the meal. Linking Words
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, you can vary your meals by adding vegetables, because some participants are only vegetarians.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
JoeLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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