some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History

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the most important subject in

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we are living in a technological world (sing/countable)so,

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reasonable that, some people claim that

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should be our top priority over other less significant

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on

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including health, career, leisure,

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so forth.As a consequence, having knowledge about both of these

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is a must and should be above

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, during the recent COVID 19 pandemic, people’s

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be saved only via discovering and producing vaccines.

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accurately only through modern equipment .In fact,

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are vital for today's

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but , it is not efficient lonely alone because

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experiences can always be helpful. After all the modal

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is the most important subject in

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through which, students can learn many lessons from the past. According to their opinion,

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can shed light on pupils’ way because

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it is full of experience and advice.

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generation must read

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as a skilled teacher for all generations

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for younger ones. And , there is no doubt that

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it should be taught alongside

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and

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. To sum up,

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appropriate balance is needed

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in teaching these

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,

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are necessary

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by learning them students can be more capable of making building a brighter

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future for their society.