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Some people believe that the best way to teach children to behave well is through punishment, others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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There has been a discussion about how to teach
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children
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. Some of them believe that rewarding and praising students is the best
way
, others believe that punishment through their learning is the best
way
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first
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Throughout
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 teaching or even, we have heard how teachers teach the
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children
 in different styles and
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approaches
. All of these styles have their own
way
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here is what we have at the end as a basis of
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 us that if we punish little ones, they
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 mind when they grow up. Of course, it is related to how heavy is the punishment but
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 the end it is the same for everyone, not having a healthy mindset in
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 saying struggling with their mental health.
However
, as long as we have the right communication to teach
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the student
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student
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students
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 how to deal with being kind and
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respectful
 to each other, they would be well
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 as much as everyone. If teachers praise them
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 their good attitudes, they would be encouraged to do the same thing.
Furthermore
, those
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attitudes
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children
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behavior
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 is the key to
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 them how to have these
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 as their behaviour. They would
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 that
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 being kind and
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respectful
 to each other make the world
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 place. In conclusion, teachers should encourage students
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 their well behave is the best
way
 for teaching.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Behavioral norms
  • Social boundaries
  • Consequences
  • Resentment
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Approval
  • Extrinsic motivation
  • Intrinsic motivation
  • Consistency
  • Clear communication
  • Psychological research
  • Practical outcomes
  • Discipline
  • Nurturing
  • Behavioral psychology
  • Operant conditioning
  • Constructive criticism
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