Some people believe that the best way to teach children to behave well is through punishment, others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There has been a discussion about how to teach

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children

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school

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. Some of them believe that rewarding and praising students is the best

way

, others believe that punishment through their learning is the best

way

to teach them. I am in favour of the

first

statement which is related to rewarding and praising students.

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Throughout

our education, we have observed or taken in part of different approaches

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teaching or even, we have heard how teachers teach the

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children

in different styles and

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. All of these styles have their own

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but the important point

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here is what we have at the end as a basis of

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of the

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us that if we punish little ones, they

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mind when they grow up. Of course, it is related to how heavy is the punishment but

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the end it is the same for everyone, not having a healthy mindset in

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saying struggling with their mental health.

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, as long as we have the right communication to teach

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the student

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students

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how to deal with being kind and

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to each other, they would be well

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aware

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as much as everyone. If teachers praise them

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their good attitudes, they would be encouraged to do the same thing.

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, those

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attitudes

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which is praised by teacher becomes their usual reaction. At that point, rewarding

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children

related to their

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is the key to

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them how to have these

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as their behaviour. They would

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that

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being kind and

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respectful

to each other make the world

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place. In conclusion, teachers should encourage students

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praising or rewarding them

on

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their well behave is the best

way

for teaching.