It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for spots or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the world today, there has been a widespread controversy that some skills are inborn
such
as games and
music
while others think
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ability can be put into practice well when the teaching is passed to an individual.
This
essay will discuss the two
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and my personal opinion will be drawn. On the one hand, supporters of
this
view claim that enthusiasm shown towards
music
at a tender age could depict an innate attribute in a child.
For instance
, at the sound of
music
, some infant stops crying and tried to make a dance movement at the same time.
Also
few youngsters
skills
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in kicking an object despite
non prior
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knowledge
.
This
may be due to their inborn talent for sports.
On the other hand
,
opponent
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of
this
notion
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that,
knowledge
are
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Practicable and not necessarily inborn. The reason is that when children are being taught a skill
such
as
music
or game, there is
tendency
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the will act on it.
In addition
, learned
knowledge
can be likened to being gifed.
This
is due to the expertise shown
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the acquired attribute being taught.
For example
, an African man with no former
knowledge
was taught football
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by his uncle, he
then
later become a professional at it and famous as well. In my opinion, talent can be
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an inborn personality
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for some people while others can learn the same skill, develop it and become an expert at it. In conclusion,
this
essay discussed the two perspectives of people that, some
gift
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can be learned due to the fact that learning can be
practiced
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and
knowledged
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passed can become an act of expertise.
However
, some ability and expertise can be born
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an individual due to
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traits shown during
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period. ..

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