Car ownership has increased so rapidly over past thirty years that may cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. Car ownership number has surged over the past thirty years. In this essay, we’ll discuss how a large number of cars can cause a major traffic jam in cities and how government should encourage people to reduce using their cars.

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cities

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roads are busier now. I completely agree with that statement. I believe a lot more people buy cars nowadays due to the world’s development recently. One reason for that can be increased car production and

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expenditure.

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, my own

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that I live in is a lot

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bigger than it used to be and people need to move to

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places. Another reason can be that there are a lot more commuters that don’t have many options for transport to the

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using automobiles.

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,I think that the government can contribute to the citizens with more public transport options and

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modernise the old ones (

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as more subway, tram and bus lines)

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, there can be an increased

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area with added cycle zones and more cycle lanes.

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created more

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safe areas where people can park their bikes. And

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but not least, the government could make the

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greener.

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that there could be placed more trees and flowers around the urban area

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so that citizens would be more comfortable taking longer walks.

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there could be more passing areas and more passing lanes. To conclude, I stated my personal point of view on the statement and defended my way of thinking with some reasons. Afterwards, I included three ways

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mobile usage by modern and expanding public transport,

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lane and green areas.