Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that,in today's world,subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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place..while others opposed as science and technology is important
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agree that studying history gives
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role as it shows
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where we are...
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what has happened in our past time...
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