People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Should students be taught public speaking at school?

It is undeniable that public speaking is an important ability for social
life
.
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found it challenging. I believe speech in front of
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is obviously important and students have to learn about it at school. There is no doubt that nowadays
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to speak for folk has
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role in
people
's social level.
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work,
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seminars
, or even family gathering, it
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someone needs to speak for a group of
people
. Because implementing it correctly not only can make more relationships
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but
also
, may lead to more opportunities.
For example
, many employees like advertisements prefer to employ individuals with high levels of public speaking
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.
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,
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self confidence
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podcasters. In short, having
this
skill
prominent persons between throng that psychologically have impacted on
life
satisfaction.
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this
ability in
schools
can have many benefits for students that make performing it necessary.
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, many
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needs individuals to speak correctly in different situations. So, if
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it in
schools
,
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will make more
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job opportunities
.
Moreover
, it is clear that adolescence is a critical period that
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traits in teenagers and
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some of them shy.
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public speaking
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in
schools
and
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a chance to speak in front of
people
in
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education system often solve their shyness which
consequently
will have been impacting on social and emotional relations.
Besides
these, speech for a group of
people
is one of the
life
skills that
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better
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society. The result of teaching it will be individuals with better mental health in
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job positions. In conclusion, it is clear that public speaking is an essential
skill
for social
life
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educating it in
schools
often makes
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future for students.
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