Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（

In recent years ,

one

of the important problems facing commuters is spending too much

time

in the workplace.Because of

this

, the reason some people argued that

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the best way to decrease the

rate

of travelling

time

, is by changing the entertainment

areas

such

as Parks and Gardens into residential buildings. Others don't agree. I completely disagree with the statement.

This

essay will articulate the points in the coming paragraph with my opinion. On the

one

hand,all the developed cities have huge spaces for fun parts like playing

areas

and refreshments -gardens. And

also

these are situated in the suburbs of cities .

Furthermore

,Most of the commercial buildings are near

this

area.If those

areas

are converted into residential buildings,

then

it will be less

time

to travel for commuters.

For example

,

one

of the metropolitan cities has 10 acres of botanical park in the centre part . If they have changed the park into a residential building

then

the people have approximate 5 minutes of travel to their office daily.

On the other hand

, I disagree with the opinion that, with the ease of travelling purpose, we cannot spoil the beauty of the nature. As we know , today's hectic lifestyle needs some refreshment

areas

. We all do not live for the carrier and work. Everyone needs happiness in life .

First

of all these

areas

are

one

of the positive feelings parts of the majority of people.

Secondly

,If Government supports

this

opinion

then

it will be a future danger. The air pollution

rate

also

increases and health issues will happen.

For instance

,If the plants are removed from the area

then

the emission of oxygen

rate

is reduced and as a

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result some major health issues may come

such

as allergies,heart diseases and so on. To conclude, Some individuals believed that. the

rate

of

time

of travel by commuters will reduce by the decline of nature beauty.I completely disagree with the points, I think it leads to facing another problem of issues in health.