Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（

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of the important problems facing commuters is spending too much

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in the workplace.Because of

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the best way to decrease the

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of travelling

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, is by changing the entertainment

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as Parks and Gardens into residential buildings. Others don't agree. I completely disagree with the statement.

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hand,all the developed cities have huge spaces for fun parts like playing

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and refreshments -gardens. And

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these are situated in the suburbs of cities .

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,Most of the commercial buildings are near

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area.If those

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are converted into residential buildings,

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it will be less

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to travel for commuters.

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of the metropolitan cities has 10 acres of botanical park in the centre part . If they have changed the park into a residential building

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the people have approximate 5 minutes of travel to their office daily.

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, I disagree with the opinion that, with the ease of travelling purpose, we cannot spoil the beauty of the nature. As we know , today's hectic lifestyle needs some refreshment

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. We all do not live for the carrier and work. Everyone needs happiness in life .

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of the positive feelings parts of the majority of people.

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it will be a future danger. The air pollution

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increases and health issues will happen.

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,If the plants are removed from the area

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the emission of oxygen

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is reduced and as a

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result some major health issues may come

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as allergies,heart diseases and so on. To conclude, Some individuals believed that. the

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of

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of travel by commuters will reduce by the decline of nature beauty.I completely disagree with the points, I think it leads to facing another problem of issues in health.