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You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: What the gadget is What you think about it Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

#gadget #home #friend #advice #alternatives
Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. I received your letter and was delighted to know that you are planning to procure the same
soup
 maker as mine.
Last
 weekend the electric
soup
 maker was delivered
at
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 my place by Amazon. The appliance prepares 1.5 litres of vegetable
soup
 at a time. The automated function is simple, it chops the vegetables, steams, and blends
it
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 into hot piping
soup
. It has two modes, smooth type
or
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 chunky type which can be selected as per individual preference. It’s portable
however
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 difficult to clean after use. Since I can now consume lip-smacking
soup
everyday
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 without having any stress to prepare it
,
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 because it gets done unattended and saves
incredible
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 amount of my time.
Moreover
, I have been maintaining a healthy lifestyle, and by using
this
 device nutrients are added to my meals. You may consider a few other options like
eletric
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electric
 blender or
stemo
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stems
stem
stereo
 too as it has similar operations at a lower price.
Infact
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In fact
, it can be used to prepare other food items like cake batter or boiled eggs too. Let me know if you need any
further
 assistance. Regards, Devika
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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