Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spent most of the time indoors and have little exposure to the nature. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons of your answers and give relevant example of your experience.

In a contemporary world, because of the advance

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technology and

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electronic devices, many children spent on these things

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most of their

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so they have less exposure to meeting

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the

nature

.

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them the experience

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the natural world and is mainly to learn

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how to protect and maintain the ecosystem.

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,

parents

are

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vital

roles

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teaching

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adolscents

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adolescents

adolescent

. Nowadays,

parents

are hectic with their work schedules and they have less

time

to spend with their children.

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, children are using modern technology devices and spending most of their

time

in their own space and they have a reduction in experience

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the

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nature

.

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, if

youngesters

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youngsters

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in touch with animals, trees and streams, they will know the importance of their existence. At school, teachers can teach

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them and it involves

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the pivotal

roles

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of

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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. If they are experienced in maintaining the tastes of

environment

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the environment

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at their younger age, they will

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the wildlife creatures in the future.

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, it should be

reponsible

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responsible

for both teachers and

parents

as they are shaping their

offsprings

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.

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, whether they are experiencing

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these

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school curriculums but if they did not get in touch with

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nature

, they will not know the difficulty of how to maintain the environment and restore back itself due to pollution by human actions. In summary, even though they are spending almost their

time

indoors,

nevertheless

,

parents

and teachers should encourage

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get in touch with

nature

,

hence

, the adolescents will know the dangers and how to preserve the environment as well as reduce the pollution level.