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Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read. You should include : 1. Describe the book 2. How it can help him/her? 3. Where can he get from?

Dear Sophia, I hope you have been well and that you have adjusted to the lifestyle
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 the Sunshine Coast. I know that moving into a new place is always hard and, especially at the beginning, is easy to find yourself with a lot of free time. If you are looking
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 a meaningful
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 to read I can give you a very good recommendation of a
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 called ‘Wired for love’ I have just finished. The
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 is written by Stan Tatkin who is a psychologist
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 in couples therapy and, contrary to what it may look like, the
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 is not only for people
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 relationships or couples in trouble; the
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 provides quite a profound insight about romantic relationships and can be applied to single people too. As a single person dating, I think that you might find the
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 quite helpful in understanding better what type of relationship you are seeking, what mistakes you may have done in the past with previous partners and how you can achieve an optimal love life. I bought the
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 online through Booktopia, but I am sure you can find it in other bookstores. If you have trouble finding it, I would be more than happy to send it to you as well. Please let me know how you are doing. I look forward to hearing about your latest adventures. Missing you, Ari

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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