Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think taht in today's world subjects like Science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example forrm your own knowledge or experience.

There is a contentious debate over the
subject
taught in school that
history
is one of the most important subjects while other people think in today's world, The weightage of subjects like Science and technology should be more than
history
subject
. I opine that Science & technology and
History
both move hand in hand. In fact, they are dependent on one another by discussing
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relatable with appropriate examples.
To begin
with,
history
is a crucial
subject
for the students to buildup
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relations with the past resulting in
strong
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foundation.
In addition
, the development of civilization with immense strength and how language developed eventually into the script by
initially
engraving the drawings on a rock were the key features.
For instance
, The UNESCO World heritage sites
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conspicuous results that the way language
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was pretty much the same that we use now.
On the other hand
,
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Science and technology have become advanced
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suppressing the importance of
history
. Despite
of
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people are overwhelmed are now relying on the facts that follow the ancient principles for solutions.
For example
, nowadays the students want to approach
towards
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an
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artificial intelligence by learning computers as it is a lucrative field that attracts many students as carrier perspectives are in turn used to follow a well-established rule. In conclusion, both the learnings are important to make a well-defined carrier path as certain practical
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have to be reversed in future which requires
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to
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up the historical methods. I opine that the Pupil should be taught every
subject
with equal importance by imparting the most important information.
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