You are a student at a University in the UK. You have recently lost your University ID card. Write to the local police station, giving details of who you are what happened and ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you regarding the

university

card

that went missing after a training program held at my

university

held on the 20th - 22nd of May. I am Hannah Williams, pursuing computer science at Rajasthan

University

, Kota. I belong to the Jodhpur city but currently staying at the

university

hostel at Kota for my education. I was one of the volunteers in the training event, which had students from various universities and colleges in the country. The

last

I remember using my

card

was at 3pm on the 22nd of may but

then

it has been missing since

then

. I tried searching for it on the campus and at the hostel but nobody it. In order to process a new

card

, my institution needs me to file a complaint with you. So, I request you to add my details to your records so I can place an application for a new

card

. Yours sincerely Hannah

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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You are a student at a University in the UK. You have recently lost your University ID card. Write to the local police station, giving details of who you are what happened and ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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