You are a student at a University in the UK. You have recently lost your University ID card. Write to the local police station, giving details of who you are what happened and ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

#student #university #uk #id #card #police #station #record

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you regarding the

university

card

that went missing after a training program held at my

university

held on the 20th - 22nd of May. I am Hannah Williams, pursuing computer science at Rajasthan

University

, Kota. I belong to the Jodhpur city but currently staying at the

university

hostel at Kota for my education. I was one of the volunteers in the training event, which had students from various universities and colleges in the country. The

last

I remember using my

card

was at 3pm on the 22nd of may but

then

it has been missing since

then

. I tried searching for it on the campus and at the hostel but nobody it. In order to process a new

card

, my institution needs me to file a complaint with you. So, I request you to add my details to your records so I can place an application for a new

card

. Yours sincerely Hannah

Submitted by hansa.pandit11 on Mon Jun 13 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

163 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a believe that examinations are the sucessful measuring technique for the pupil's performance rather than continual assessment methods like coursework and project. I completely agree this view which I will explain in this essay.
4
band
The cost of air travel has fallen in recent years. Do you believe this is a positive or negative development? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, the reduction of air travel is notable. well, in this case, although there are some positive impact but I mostly agree that, it exerts a great negative outcome on development because it gives access everyone to travel since it is cheap and on the other hand, it leads them to make less profit.
5
band
More and more young people are using drugs and alcohol and as a result, breaking the law. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?
It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of addiction in students is escalating at an alarming rate in the current scenario. Although the intake of pills and alcohol is strictly prohibited, addicts have access to it through illegal means. There are a plethora of reasons, yet some sensible solutions are also available to curb this grave concern.
6
band
Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?
We are presently living in the twenty-first century which is acknowledged as an era of technological advancement. However, many organisations are nowadays complaining that their workers are not equipped with the proper talent for collaboration. According to my point of view, this is an alarming issue, with the reasons embedded deep down in the existing social structure. I intend to highlight the remedies for the same in this essay.
6.5
band
A magzine wants to include contributions from its readers for an arcticle called 'the book that influenced me most' write a letter to the editor of the magzine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about. -explain how this book influenced you. -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people. write at least 150 words.
I have been an ardent reader of your weekly columns in 'The Washington Post'. I look forward to your articles every Sunday and have been following it since a very long time. I am writing this to give my contribution for the article 'the book that influenced me most', as requested in 'The Washington Post' from its readers. 'Revolution 2020' by 'Charlie Seth' is one such book that has influenced me in many ways. This book has laid down the foundations of our education system and precisely explains how flawed and outdated our education system is.

You are a student at a University in the UK. You have recently lost your University ID card. Write to the local police station, giving details of who you are what happened and ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

The cost of air travel has fallen in recent years. Do you believe this is a positive or negative development? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

More and more young people are using drugs and alcohol and as a result, breaking the law. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?