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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for job. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

#people #background #cities #job #consequences #offer
There is
increase
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 in
migration
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the migration
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rate
 whereby many
people
 move from rural
areas
 to urban
areas
 for the sake of
Job
 seeking.
At
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the
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a
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 result of
this
, there will be overpopulation and
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an increase
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increase
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increased
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crime
rate
 in the municipal
areas
.
However
, the government can provide
job
opportunity
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opportunities
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 as well as effective security.
To begin
 with, overpopulation is one of the effects that can occur. To make
this
more
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clearer, when
majority
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the majority
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 of
people
 vacate their base to the
city
, there will be
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an increase
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increase
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rate
 of
people
 living in the
city
 which leads to overcrowding.
For instance
, there is a particular
city
 in Nigeria called Lagos which is located
in
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southwest
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the southwest
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of
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Nigeria, the
city
 comprises
of
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many individuals because
if
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of
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 its
job
 opportunity
to
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for
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people
.
However
, the
city
 is known as
overcrowded
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the overcrowded
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city
 in Nigeria.
In addition
,
crime
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the crime
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rate
 will
increase
.
This
 is because,
people
 relocate to greener pastures in order to earn money but if they cannot get employment, they tend to involve in an illegal
act
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acts
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 so as to provide cash to feed themselves.
Furthermore
, there are
plethora
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a plethora
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 of possible measures.
Firstly
, the government should provide
job
 opportunities for
people
 living in countryside
areas
.
This
 means,
if
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that if
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 there is enough work that can shelter
for
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their needs,
this
 will reduce them relocating to
city
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the city
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 for employment. It will as well prevent overcrowding in the urban area. Another measure is that
,
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 there should be
provision
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the provision
a provision
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 of enough security agencies in order to punish anyone who
involve
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 in
crime
 which will
also
 deter
people
 from engaging in any illegal
act
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activity
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. In conclusion,
majority
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the majority
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 of
people
 keep leaving their area for
better
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a better
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 standard of living especially to earn funds.
However
,
this
 can lead to overcrowding and
crime
rate
 which can
be combat
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be combated
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 by providing
job
 opportunities for
people
 and
employ
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employing
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 more security agencies.
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