Some people think government is wasting money on arts subject in schools and that the money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view.

Over the

last

decade, governments across the globe significantly spent their annual budget on enhancing art and gallery in

schools

. Some economists claim that the public fund should be invested

for

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other school activities than arts. I

completly

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completely

agree with

this

statement since

infrastructure

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for arts is sufficiently built, investments could be switched to improve

sports

facilities and teaching current technology. To commence with

sports

, one cannot deny that to build

healthy

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lifestyle and physique

sports

is a better option for students. Unfortunately, in

this

modern world, many students face a lack of facilities to play their desired

sports

.

For instance

, as per a recent survey conducted by the Child Care Department,

India

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60% of

schools

in India do not have

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playgrounds

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play grounds

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playgrounds

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and necessary

sports

equipment.

In addition

to

infrastucture

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infrastructure

,

in

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apply

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many

schools

across the globe lack

of

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faculty to train pupils in their

sports

due

which

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they are not able to

particpate

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participate

or learn their desired

sports

. To help, policymakers could build more

play grounds

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& clubs, provide

sports

equipments

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equipment

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, and recruit more

sports

trainers.

In addition

to

sports

, some colleges are teaching outdated education due to which students do not have an opportunity to learn current trends. To explain

further

, the

curriculam

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curriculum

followed by some

schools

are designed decades ago most of the syllabus is not

require

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anymore

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for the current generation.

For instance

, In India,

tenth grade

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kids still study about

invention

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of

telephone

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when technology is so

adavanced

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advanced

and invented

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the smart

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smart

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smartphone

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phone

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.

Besides

technology,

curriculum

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the curriculum

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is not updated with current political and geographical changes

as a result

youth are thought

wrongly

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of wrongly

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.

For example

, in some countries books are updated only once in five years, in

this

period, many geographical changes like

Britain

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exit,

political

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and political

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changes like

change

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of Prime Minister or President are may take place but books are not up to date. To help, policymakers could ensure books are correctly printed every year and the syllabus is up to date with current market requirements.

Finally

, to recapitulate, some people claim arts

is

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not important and governments should invest that money on other

concering

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concerning

topics. I agree that completely due to the aforementioned other concerning issues that should be a priority for authorities mainly improving

sports

and current trends.