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Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #focus #resources #animals #birds
Contrary to some people’s belief that
protection
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 of wildlife is overly hyped and funds are  spent irresponsibly on them,I differ
to
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 that opinion,as it  has still not been given the due consideration  evident from the ongoing  
extinction
  at an alarming rate.
Also
,
preservation
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the preservation
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 of
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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 is crucial for  our planet and we all need to put effort into it.
Firstly
,if
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 of wild flora and fauna was given high priority,the
extinction
 rate would have come down.But,every new  census seems to add a new species to the threatened or
extinction
 list. The inability to control the eternal disappearance of various living beings should be regretted.
For example
,in India a decade ago white tigers were included in the threatened list but, through diligent measures,they have been restored to normalcy but a recent survey showed the possible
extinction
 of rhinoceros,Since the  issue is only partially solved,it  only leads  to newer consequences.
Secondly
,spending a measurable amount and resources on  nature and  
ecosystem
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 is necessary for
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sustainable growth and development.As loss of these vital species would result in the disruption of
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biosphere thereby leading to adverse events in future,both sudden and gradual changes,ultimately making the earth uninhabitable.Recognising these probable issues,the authorities have turned their attention
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 the grave situation.   To conclude,I applaud the governments  for attending to these environmental issues through various measures but at the same
time
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 it has to be given more focus because
apparently
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 the issue has not yet been under control.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wildlife conservation
  • ecosystem preservation
  • sustainable development
  • biodiversity
  • habitat destruction
  • ecological balance
  • ethical responsibility
  • economic benefits
  • endangered species
  • poaching
  • education and awareness
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