Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
A
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mother
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their mother
his mother
her mother
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language
learning. Some believe that junior high school
is the best to learn overseas
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an overseas
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the high
school
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, both have their own pros and cons. Therefore
, before commenting on my decision, both the
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the non
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wax
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language
other than mother
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their mother
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tongue
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more
easy.
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On the contrary
, the latter view suggests that high school
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children
childrens
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children
language
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school
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in
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school
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