Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

A
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new born
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child
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learning
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their mother
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tongue after his born
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him
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everything surrounding her. There are split opinions regarding, multiple
language
learning. Some believe that junior high
school
is the best to learn
overseas
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language
, whereas another group of thinkers support
high
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school
is good.
However
, both have their own pros and cons.
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, before commenting on my decision, both
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opinion would be discussed. Explaining the former opinion, the primary
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the supporters would put forward is the study of
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non native
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language
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for
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toddlers is more comfortable.
This
is because
,
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5 to 10 years kids are like
wax
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statue
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and it is helpful for the tutor to teach them any
language
other than
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tounge
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tongue
.
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a
4 year old
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kid almost learnt his
mother
tongue meanwhile he
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french at
school
learning
of
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different languages at the same time is
more
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easy.
On the contrary
, the latter view suggests that high
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children
childrens
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are good at learning outside
language
because they are mature enough than kids
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junior
school
.
Besides
this
,
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study
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of new
language
after
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junior
school
is more difficult for every student.
language
is just similar to our habits and it includes in our daily communication. In fact, a small kid is
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fast learner.
However
, they do not understand the real meaning of words,
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ideas about to make correct
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sentences
. In spite of
they
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practice daily not
for
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to get admission
in
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abroad only for fun. To conclude and give my opinion , I would say that
language
learning
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on
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and the junior
school
is the more appropriate age for the kids to understand, read and write any overseas communication. In the big picture,
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both students and teachers.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

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  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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