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Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyse the possible reasons and provide your suggestion ?

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The bar chart below illustrates the popularity of
transportation
 among the youth in four different countries. As is shown clearly in the graph,
car
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the car
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 is the most popular
transportation
 tool for young people in UK, USA and France, while the young Germans are more environment-friendly. In Britain, America and France, the usage of car accounts for the largest portion of the ways which the youngers commute, at 60%, 60% and over 70% respectively.
Bike
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 is the
second
 choice for the same group of people in Britain and France, with the share of 29% and 15%.
However
, a contrary trend can be noticed in
USA
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, whereas the motorcycle gains more preference than
bicycle
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a bicycle
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, and accounts for 30
percentage
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. The
transportation
 pattern for Germany is completely different. The leading way of
transportation
 is riding
bicycle
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a bicycle
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 and it represents around 45%, which is the highest in the same category. Meanwhile, travelling by car makes up 40% of total commute ways.
By contrast
, the use of
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motorcycle
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 is the lowest in German, with only 15%.
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