Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the world, each and every nation have its own culture and tradition, which
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from other
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. Some people,
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think that people who are visiting from other
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should follow their
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and behaviour. whereas other people believe that the organised
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should welcome other cultural differences. The essay will explain
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statement and my complete agreement. On one hand, each
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has its own norms for their culture. When any foreigner visits another
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they should obey the norms of that particular nation. They should show respect for that laws without misunderstanding
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they have to be ready for punishment.
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, In India, many men chew tobacco every day and split it anywhere on buildings or roads, it is normal in India, but if they want to visit developed
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as the USA and Canada, they should follow their rules and regulations,
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they have to pay a huge fine.
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, As a tourist is it difficult to adopt other
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within a short period of time. Sometimes it misunderstands by them because of the language barrier. In that case, the visiting
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should pay respect to tourists rather than forcing them to obey the local
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and behaviour.
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, in the Muslim majority
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, it is believed that women are forced to cover their 99% body with black cloth which is known as Hijab.
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, in the non-muslim ,
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it is not compulsory. To conclude, In my opinion, adopting different
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and behaviour is not the right way to enjoy as a tourist. they should be treated as guests of
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and pay respect to them while exploring the nation.
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