Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the world, each and every nation have its own culture and tradition, which
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from other
nations
. Some people,
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think that people who are visiting from other
countries
should follow their
country
's
customs
and behaviour. whereas other people believe that the organised
country
should welcome other cultural differences. The essay will explain
this
statement and my complete agreement. On one hand, each
country
has its own norms for their culture. When any foreigner visits another
country
they should obey the norms of that particular nation. They should show respect for that laws without misunderstanding
otherwise
they have to be ready for punishment.
For example
, In India, many men chew tobacco every day and split it anywhere on buildings or roads, it is normal in India, but if they want to visit developed
countries
such
as the USA and Canada, they should follow their rules and regulations,
otherwise
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they have to pay a huge fine.
On the other hand
, As a tourist is it difficult to adopt other
nations
'
customs
within a short period of time. Sometimes it misunderstands by them because of the language barrier. In that case, the visiting
nations
should pay respect to tourists rather than forcing them to obey the local
customs
and behaviour.
For example
, in the Muslim majority
countries
, it is believed that women are forced to cover their 99% body with black cloth which is known as Hijab.
However
, in the non-muslim ,
countries
it is not compulsory. To conclude, In my opinion, adopting different
nations
'
customs
and behaviour is not the right way to enjoy as a tourist. they should be treated as guests of
countries
and pay respect to them while exploring the nation.
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