some people say Histroy is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are many
people
who think that studying
history
can be really crucial for society and
this
is the best title for different groups of the community to learn in the university or college,
in contrast
with
this
matter with the advancement of technology another part the
people
will express alter sciences are helpful for progress any countries,
this
essay will check both views and I strongly disagree with
this
matter I will give my perspective in continue. there are many
people
that think
history
is a very serious course in all the universities,
history
is really necessary for knowing about the past and we use that for different issues when we study
history
we can obtain good information about before
also
actually we can learn of past in order we have a good life in the future,
otherwise
, we want to witness our problem in our life will to repeat again and again,
for example
, we can consider a farmer, they learned their work by father or grandfather as well as they can use the experience of before generation for promoting their work and if want to condone past generations experience they can not succeed to their job.
In contrast
, another group of
people
tell that there are many topics
such
as
science
and tech that are the most important in compare
history
, many
people
think that infants and adolescents must learn
science
and technology in the schools and university or college
also
these titles are better than
history
,
furthermore
, they found useless to read
history
also
they said
this
will waste their time,
however
, reading
science
and tech can be really proper for different age but studying
history
can be a positive point for us,
for instance
, we want to read
science
and tech without we know anything about the past we can commit many problems that happened in the past and in fact, we will repeat them,
in addition
,
this
will dye out our time. In conclusion, I firmly disagree with
this
topic, and in my opinion, we can not alternative these materials together and each one will help me in an appropriate situation
also
there are many reasons that we have to use
history
for success in different jobs.
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