In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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constructing new railway lines for interconnecting cities through means of fast trains.

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should be upgraded as it is the most common way of

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with modernized sitting arrangements in

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the city. Talking about the railway system which connects

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comes a drawback that they are costlier than public transport and

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economically backward classes.

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trains despite

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lesser users should not be beneficial to spend money on. To sum up, keeping in

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mind the requirements and needs of the public emphasis should be done on

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of public

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rather than building new railway tracks for faster running trains.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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