In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is believed by many people in various countries that are huge

poportion

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proportion

portion

of money should

be spend

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for

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on

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constructing new railway lines for interconnecting cities through means of fast trains.

However

, in

other opinion

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another opinion

other opinions

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same

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the same

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amount should

be spend

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be spent

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on public

transportation

for improvising it. I strongly opine that public

transports

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transport

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should be upgraded as it is the most common way of

transportation

among people.

To begin

with, there are various means of public

transportation

like

buses

,

taxi

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taxis

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,

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and autorickshaw

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autorickshaw

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autorickshaws

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. All these means of

transportation

are mainly used by economically weaker

section

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.

This

transportation

are

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budget friendly

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to them. The infrastructure of

buses

running

from

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past

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the past

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many years has degraded a lot. Money should

be spend

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be spent

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on providing

public

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the public

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with modernized sitting arrangements in

buses

along with

air condition

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air-condition

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facilities.

Consequently

,

government

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the government

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should

also

increase the number of

buses

connecting various places

of

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in

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the city. Talking about the railway system which connects

intercites

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intercity

are one of the fast means of

transportation

.

However

, with

this

advantage

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their

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apply

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comes a drawback that they are costlier than public transport and

hence

not affordable

by

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to

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economically backward classes.

On the other

hand

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providing

public

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the public

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with more

number of

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apply

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trains despite

of

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lesser users should not be beneficial to spend money on. To sum up, keeping in

the

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mind the requirements and needs of the public emphasis should be done on

development

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the development

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of public

transportation

rather than building new railway tracks for faster running trains.