Some people say that supermarkets and manufacturers have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on products they sell. Others believe that it is the consumer’s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that reducing a bunch of
product's
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coverages are
responsibility
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the responsibility
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of hypermarkets and factories. While others think that packaging is
consumer's
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fault. I will discuss both views and give my own opinions. On the one hand, either supermarkets or big manufacturers contribute to
mass
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the mass
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production of commercial goods. They
waste
much even for one production, from
single
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a single
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pack as the
first
layer until the bigger packaging to
load
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the dozen of it.
For instance
, if in a day the factory makes 1000 cookies, it will use the same
amount
of plastics to cover it.
Furthermore
, after the products are distributed to
supermarket
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the supermarket
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, customer consumes more plastics to carry their groceries. As a consequence, if there
was
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200 buyers
come
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to
supermarket
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and each of them did not bring their own bag, the
amount
of litter would increase as well
On the other hand
, the
amount
of
waste
is supported by the number of
customer
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customers
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, the more people buy products, the worsen.
Life-style
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may become one of the
reason
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reasons
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why the number of
waste
increased.
For instance
, K-Pop fans compete to buy
stuffs
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based on their idol's endorsement.
Besides
, in some cases, panic buying causes the
amount
of
waste
significantly
rise
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.
For example
, in
pandemic
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a pandemic
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situation, people consume more instant food to avoid social interaction. To conclude, I believe that hypermarkets and factories tend to produce more
product's
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coverages rather than personal
consumtions
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consumption
consumptions
.
However
, it can be reduced by strict regulations or policies from the government.
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