Some people say that supermarkets and manufacturers have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on products they sell. Others believe that it is the consumer’s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that reducing a bunch of
product's
coverages are Change noun form
product
responsibility
of hypermarkets and factories. While others think that packaging is Add an article
the responsibility
consumer's
fault. I will discuss both views and give my own opinions.
On the one hand, either supermarkets or big manufacturers contribute to Correct article usage
the consumer's
mass
production of commercial goods. They Correct article usage
the mass
waste
much even for one production, from single
pack as the Correct article usage
a single
first
layer until the bigger packaging to load
the dozen of it. Change the verb form
loading
For instance
, if in a day the factory makes 1000 cookies, it will use the same amount
of plastics to cover it. Furthermore
, after the products are distributed to supermarket
, customer consumes more plastics to carry their groceries. As a consequence, if there Add an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
was
200 buyers Change the verb form
were
come
to Wrong verb form
coming
supermarket
and each of them did not bring their own bag, the Add an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
amount
of litter would increase as well
On the other hand
, the amount
of waste
is supported by the number of customer
, the more people buy products, the worsen. Change to a plural noun
customers
Life-style
may become one of the Correct your spelling
Lifestyle
reason
why the number of Change to a plural noun
reasons
waste
increased. For instance
, K-Pop fans compete to buy stuffs
based on their idol's endorsement. Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
Besides
, in some cases, panic buying causes the amount
of waste
significantly rise
. Change the verb form
rises
For example
, in pandemic
situation, people consume more instant food to avoid social interaction.
To conclude, I believe that hypermarkets and factories tend to produce more Add an article
a pandemic
product's
coverages rather than personal Change noun form
product
consumtions
. Correct your spelling
consumption
consumptions
However
, it can be reduced by strict regulations or policies from the government.Submitted by vmuflihahf on
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