The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide information about the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in a country between 1920 and 2019.
If we look at the graphs closely, we will notice that
,
the percentage of households with electrical appliances didn't fall since 1920 except for washing machines. Remove the comma
apply
On the other hand
, housework hours didn't increase till 2019.
Refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
Refrigerators
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
using
the amount of percentage constantly growing. After 2000, both appliances using every Wrong verb form
use
households
until 2019, but only Change to a singular noun
household
refrigerator
met 100% from 1980. At the same time, in the graph, washing machines line something different. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Although
it is growing from 1920 after that year it is decreasing till 1980 and after ,that it is growing without falling until 2019.
In the next
graph of housework per week decreasing
from 1920 to 1960 so fast, which is 50% to move at 20%. Even after Wrong verb form
decreased
1960
it is still falling, but the amount was not huge. ,Add a comma
,1960
Finally
in 2019, the number of hours per week stands at 10%.Add a comma
,Finally
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