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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still ho hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays there are significant modifications in the methods of agriculture to produce the significant quantity by lowering the input costs. despite that,
people
 around the world still won't get an adequate amount of food. I will discuss the possible points to point-out key problems with relatable examples. Due to exploding population, there are many factors that influence the surge in demand for products all around the world and the increase in technological advancement is another factor which is essential to feed the
people
.
Consequently
, it results in
the
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 surge in prices that
people
 under the poverty line cannot afford to have healthy food.
For example
, In rural areas with fewer annual rainfall record suffers from the lack of harvest and sometimes they could not afford to have technological equipment due to the higher cost.
This
 factor leads to the starvation of the
people
.
Secondly
, Natural and man-made disasters are dangerous for agriculture which can ruin all the crops, interrupts soil fertility and hampers farming practices.
Hence
, skipping harvest for
next
 year which records in a decrease
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production.
For instance
, The coronavirus outbreak was
of
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the
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 major pandemic
this
 decade which took many lives of the
people
 and
hence
 the farmers skipped the produce for a year which lead to a shortage of food.
Thirdly
, greedy traders
on the other hand
 are one of the culprits for creating the issue for their own benefit. As the consequence,
the
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black marketing comes into play which eliminates the availability of poor ones. In conclusion, solutions to the problems have yet to be established and
also
,
there
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 should be strict laws for violators.
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