Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.
Nowadays, there
are
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is
increasing
number of Change the article
an increasing
the increasing
people
who are willing to travel to the
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apply
places
where conditions are extreme. In this
essay, I would like to point out the pros and cons for the
travellers who are willing to do so.
Needless to say, there are several benefits Correct article usage
apply
for
visiting Change preposition
to
such
places
. One could witness the untouched beauty and serene landscapes all by themselves. This
is because touristy locations are ideally bustling and full of people
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wandering
wondering
around. Correct your spelling
wandering
Secondly
, people
could have the
sense of achievement upon reaching the destination. Correct article usage
a
For example
, people
who are climbing the infamous Mount Everest are not only for experience
but Add an article
the experience
also
for their personal achievement.
On the other side of the matter, there are several disadvantages regarding to
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apply
traveling
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travelling
such
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to such
places
. One thing I would like to mention is that some people
could find really
frustrating when looking for immediate medical attention. Correct pronoun usage
it really
Such
remote places
are pretty isolated and emergency services could be afar if one is in need. Secondly
, going such
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to such
places
might cost an arm and a leg such
as accommodation and hiring personal guides. To make it worse, many layovers and delays are often expected along the way since direct flight
may not be possible. Fix the agreement mistake
flights
Last
but not least, if the travellers are encountered unfortunate events such
as theft or injured, insurance companies might not cover the cost and in the end, the travellers might end up paying by themselves.
In conclusion, travelling to locations where conditions are extreme could have disadvantages such
as limited medical services, high cost of travelling around, delays and insurance coverage even though they might find untouched beauty and have sense
of achievement. In my point of view, the cons outweigh the pros clearly and the Add an article
a sense
people
who are willing to travel there should really research and plan well before making the trips.Submitted by minthetster on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
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- however
- although
- even though
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