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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink scientifically proven bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Health
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 is a crucial factor
that is
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 the major concern of each individual and government worldwide.
Therefore
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, some
people
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 say that all categories of
food
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 or drink that have been proven by scientists to be harmful to human
health
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 should be banned from sale. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
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 viewpoint, and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
First
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,
people
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 have the right to choose what type of
food
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 they like. There are various kinds of
food
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 which are assumed to be detrimental to human
health
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, ranging from fast
food
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 and soft drinks to pastries, and according to numerous
people
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, they have good taste and are delicious. If these
foods
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 were banned, life would be less enjoyable.
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, almost everyone is aware of the consequences if they take too many of them. Some
people
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 cannot control themselves with an appropriate amount of these
foods
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, which leads to suffering
health
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 problems.
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, it does not mean that will happen to all
people
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, so they do not deserve to be taken out of these treats from their lives.
Secondly
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, we can deny their convenience in our lives.
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, students who are constantly preoccupied with their studies or workers who have little time to relax after a long day at work. To save their time, all they need to do is to put a package of
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that is
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 sold in any convenience store or market into their microwaves and enjoy it after 2 or 3 minutes.
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, these
food
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 industries have created a large number of jobs and contribute to the economy with huge taxes. Admittedly, these kinds of
foods
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 have a negative effect on our
health
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.
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, eating too much fast
food
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 can lead to being overweight or even obese.
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, with a suitable amount and combined with doing exercise regularly, those
health
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 issues will be alleviated. In conclusion, limiting outlets that sell
foods
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 that have been scientifically proven to be bad for human
health
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 cannot address the
health
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 problem.
Instead
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, the government should implement policies to promote public awareness campaigns about a healthy diet and lifestyle. That would be more efficient.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • regulations
  • obesity
  • related diseases
  • consumer choice
  • education
  • harmful products
  • economic implications
  • food industry
  • job losses
  • economic downturns
  • cultural practices
  • personal freedoms
  • inclusive approach
  • health risks
  • health benefits
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