You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter say which points in the article you about explain ways in which year Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town Centre to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam I've read your article, and I'm writing
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letter to express my opinion regarding it.
First
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, not all the
town
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centres
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in my country are the same.
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, the purpose of building a
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town
two
centre
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to
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exhibit the best part of the
city
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and to make the resident's life more convenient.
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, the
town
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centres
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between cities have many similarities,
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as luxury clothing shops and many convenience stores.
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, there are some cities that are determined to build unique
town
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centres
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.
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, the
city
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centre
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in Beijing is unmatched. It is designed
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to the forbidden
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and mixed with all the historic sites to create an unprecedented atmosphere. It's worth mentioning that the Olympic matches in 2008 made Beijing's
city
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centre
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even more special. So as to impress the foreign visitors, the government built a matchless national stadium. Now,
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stadium has become a symbol of the
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.
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, the
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centre
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in Shanghai is unique as well. I have been there once, and it was highly impressive. The
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centre
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is designed
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to the most iconic landmark of Shanghai - Oriental Pearl Tower. In conclusion, even though the
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centres
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between cities are similar but they are not the same in my country. I hope my statement can vary your opinion. Kind regards
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