You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter say which points in the article you about explain ways in which year Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town Centre to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir or Madam
I've read your article, and I'm writing
this
letter to express my opinion regarding it.
First
, not all the town
centres
in my country are the same. Although
, the purpose of building a twon
Correct your spelling
town
two
centre
to
exhibit the best part of the Add a missing verb
is to
city
and to make the resident's life more convenient. Therefore
, the town
centres
between cities have many similarities, such
as luxury clothing shops and many convenience stores. However
, there are some cities that are determined to build unique town
centres
. For example
, the city
centre
in Beijing is unmatched. It is designed next
to the forbidden city
and mixed with all the historic sites to create an unprecedented atmosphere. It's worth mentioning that the Olympic matches in 2008 made Beijing's city
centre
even more special. So as to impress the foreign visitors, the government built a matchless national stadium. Now, this
stadium has become a symbol of the city
.
Second
, the town
centre
in Shanghai is unique as well. I have been there once, and it was highly impressive. The city
centre
is designed next
to the most iconic landmark of Shanghai - Oriental Pearl Tower.
In conclusion, even though the city
centres
between cities are similar but they are not the same in my country.
I hope my statement can vary your opinion.
Kind regardsSubmitted by junyiwu029 on
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