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Some people believe that children have the right to make mistakes. While others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss the both view and give your opinion.

#people #children #right #mistakes #adults
Children
 require
knowledge
 by making
mistakes
 it's quite
there
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their
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 human
rights
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right
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, while
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others
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other
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others
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 think that they should prevent from doing
mistakes
 for their bright future. Both
statement
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 have
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valid ground in favour of them I strongly believe that. Now I am going to discuss both the opinion and
finally
 express my opinion regarding
this
 controversial issue.
Children's
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 are innocent so they cannot define the right and wrong
thing
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things
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. It is quite natural for them to commit
mistake
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mistakes
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 due to
lack
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a lack
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 of
knowledge
.
This
 is the age of curiosity while they
wants
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 to acquire
knowledge
 from all the unknown things. So they should not prevent
from
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this
 trend of gaining
knowledge
.
For instance
, in Japan parents are
giving
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opportunity
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to
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 their
children
 to do anything without any prevention. We say
as a result
 they are becoming intellectual in future which leads them to be techno hero of the world. So all
guardians
 should give freedom their
children
 to acquire unlimited
knowledge
in
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the
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 early age of life.
On the other hand
, it's a Holi duty for parents to keep their
children
 from doing
mistakes
.
Morover
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Moreover
,
guardians
 are the
first
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young people. So they must give the proper guideline to their
of
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spring as they do not get
chance
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 to derail.
For instance
, many countries of the world nowadays formed some rules in
where
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to
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guardians
 not to do anything against their
children
's
willing
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.
This
 is not a good thing for going
up
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children
 indeed. Parents must have the right to control their
children
, who
is
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society
to
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 a heavenly destination. From the discussion
of
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above
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 we can say that all the
children
 of the world learn everything by doing
mistakes
.
Guardians
 should allow them to do that
in
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 a certain limit level. After crossing the limit they should prevent them from doing
mistakes
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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