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The bar chart illustrates the investigation of Australian people's habits of consumption of
coffee
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and tea. Generally, inhabitants in
Adelaide
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were willing to buy instant
coffee
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, while people in the other four areas liked to go to cafes. As is shown clearly in the graph, city residents who went to cafes for
coffee
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or tea account for the largest share in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart, at 61%, 64%, 55% and 63% respectively. It is noteworthy that the
second
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-largest portion of the cost was instant
coffee
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in the
last
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4 weeks in these four cities.
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, the fraction of people who drank fresh
coffee
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was the smallest in both these four places and
Adelaide
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, all of them were below 45
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. A contrary trend could be found when we examine
Adelaide
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, the instant
coffee
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took the largest market share and was just 1% higher than the population who enjoyed beverages in the
coffee
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shops.
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, all these three categories in
Adelaide
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were no more than 50%.
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