HUMAN ACTIVITIES HAS HAD A NEGATIVE IMPACT ON PLANTS AND ANIMALS AROUND THE WORLD.SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THIS COULDNOT BE CHNAGED WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT ACTIONS CAN BE TAKEN TO BRING ABOUT THE CHANGE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Undoubtedly, flora and fauna all around the world are adversely impacted by human actions. People have different opinions
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some
steps
can be taken into consideration to ensure some positive changes in
this
situation or not.
However
, I agree with
former
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viewpoint which I am going to elaborate in upcoming paragraphs. Fundamentally, there are myriad reasons to believe that the position of endangered
species
cannot be changed by any actions. Indeed, those
species
which are already extinct can never be got back by taking any
actions
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.
This
is because some natural calamities and disasters do not under the control of humans which were the major reasons
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extinction
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of certain
species
.
For instance
, Dinosaurs were extinct due to a natural disaster as per theories the Earth
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an
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asteroid about million years ago and now it is almost impossible to extract that
species
back. What is more, some rudimentary needs of
human
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should always be accomplished by nature in order to survive on planet Earth
such
as food and shelter.
Human
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requires a specific land to live and to accommodate industries
that
is
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why deforestation is required. Despite the aforementioned points,
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a human
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human
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can take certain
steps
to alter the situation of endangered flora and fauna.
Firstly
, human activities are highly responsible for any ecological disturbance.
This
is because
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over exploitation
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of natural resources has an adverse impact on
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wildlife
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wild life
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such
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as
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deforestation is not only accountable for
loss
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the loss
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of rare
plantation
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plantations
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but
also
for diminishing
natural
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habitats of many rare
species
.
Therefore
, by taking small
steps
such
as plantation and conserving unsustainable sources,
this
situation can be deterred.
Secondly
, with the assistance of
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technology, a huge change can be seen in the position of endangered
species
. To take the example of advanced breeding programmes run by
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such
as in India, Ranthambore national park is famous for its efforts to preserve the Asiatic Loins. In conclusion,
although
extinct wild
species
of animal and plants cannot be saved by taking any
steps
yet some endangered can be saved by taking
few
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considerable
steps
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • urban sprawl
  • habitat destruction
  • species extinction
  • biodiversity loss
  • irreversible
  • ecosystems
  • mitigate
  • conservation projects
  • sustainable practices
  • environmental protection
  • awareness
  • NGOs (Non-Governmental Organizations)
  • feasibility
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