HUMAN ACTIVITIES HAS HAD A NEGATIVE IMPACT ON PLANTS AND ANIMALS AROUND THE WORLD.SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THIS COULDNOT BE CHNAGED WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT ACTIONS CAN BE TAKEN TO BRING ABOUT THE CHANGE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Undoubtedly, flora and fauna all around the world are adversely impacted by human actions. People have different opinions

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can be taken into consideration to ensure some positive changes in

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situation or not.

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viewpoint which I am going to elaborate in upcoming paragraphs. Fundamentally, there are myriad reasons to believe that the position of endangered

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cannot be changed by any actions. Indeed, those

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which are already extinct can never be got back by taking any

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is because some natural calamities and disasters do not under the control of humans which were the major reasons

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of certain

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, Dinosaurs were extinct due to a natural disaster as per theories the Earth

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asteroid about million years ago and now it is almost impossible to extract that

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back. What is more, some rudimentary needs of

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should always be accomplished by nature in order to survive on planet Earth

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as food and shelter.

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requires a specific land to live and to accommodate industries

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why deforestation is required. Despite the aforementioned points,

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can take certain

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to alter the situation of endangered flora and fauna.

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, human activities are highly responsible for any ecological disturbance.

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over exploitation

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of natural resources has an adverse impact on

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deforestation is not only accountable for

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of rare

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for diminishing

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habitats of many rare

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, by taking small

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as plantation and conserving unsustainable sources,

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situation can be deterred.

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technology, a huge change can be seen in the position of endangered

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. To take the example of advanced breeding programmes run by

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as in India, Ranthambore national park is famous for its efforts to preserve the Asiatic Loins. In conclusion,

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of animal and plants cannot be saved by taking any

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yet some endangered can be saved by taking

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