Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation

Dear editor, I am writing
this
letter to bring to your kind notice about our local library building which is located on the main street and
this
one of the best places to read and gain the knowledge for all of us. As you know,
this
building is the representation of our core values despite current modern environmental methods and it is very unpleasant to see
this
building roof without proper cover.
In addition
, we
also
noticed that we do not have substantial ventilation during the daytime as well.
Furthermore
, there are some animals which are playing inside the library building and not sure how our public will spend time in the building. Considering the current situation and position we should bring
this
news to public attention.
Hence
, I would request you to please do help me to pass on
this
message to our local communities as they can
also
understand and come up with any action plan to secure our building without any
further
delay. I look forward to hearing your response to save our public assets. Yours Faithfully, Lakshmi.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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