The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs compared the numbers of overseas
students
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and local
students
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who studied in Australian universities from 2001 to 2010. In general, both overseas and local
students
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showed a steady increase over the period. The commencing number of overseas
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was around 10,000 in 2001, but 2009 saw a dramatic
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to reach approximately 40,000. There was
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fourfold number of overseas
students
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increased during the decade. Turning to local
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, the numbers of local
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fluctuated, but
overall
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there was a small but steady
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from about around 180,000 in 2001 to 200,000 in 2010. Moving
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the number of total
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, there was significant
growth
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in the overseas
students
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, which was 20,000 in 2001 and eventually over 80,000 in 2010, with fourfold increases in total. Local
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revealed huge
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between 2001 to 2007
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200,000 in total.
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, it remained unchanged from 2007 to 2010, at 600,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, growth with synonyms.
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