Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some

people

argue that

instead

of trying to stop climate change, we should learn to live with it. I completely disagree with

this

statement, because

this

issue is having a huge effect on the environment and we have to come up with ways to reduce it before it does serious

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to our planet. It is true that

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developments will cause the loss of traditional cultures. I agree with

this

view because technology doesn't seem to be affecting other cultures. It is true that the definition behind

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and religious

festival

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has been forgotten by many

people

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since nowadays most

people

only want to enjoy themselves.

Although

I am not against

people

having a good time, I completely disagree with the

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of these festivals being forgotten.(all these festivals have special meanings and should not be forgotten) In

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countries, a small

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of

people

earn extremely high salaries. While it is the belief of some

people

that

this

is beneficial for the country, I believe that salaries should be kept at a certain level.(everybody deserves equal pay) It is believed that an academic degree leads to future

job

opportunities. I agree with the given assertion while there are

also

some other underlying reasons involved in

this

respect. I agree with the view that the importance of academic qualifications to find a good

job

cannot be ignored. It seems that university graduates are more likely to be recruited by other companies.

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to say, businesses show

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to employ staff with academic backgrounds

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since they have had theoretical information which is a basic need to start a career. Take a young person who has recently graduated, and had learned a various array of subjects related to his academic field as an example;

this

leads him to find

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a more

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appropriate

job

with more favourable revenue.

In addition

, there are contributing factors that can be considered beneficial to

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a more satisfying

job

.

Firstly

, if individuals attend courses related to their field to attain experience, they are more likely to be welcomed by more firms.

Secondly

, personal quality is an element that by no

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cannot be neglected. More precisely, those who work on their personal characteristics

such

as being well-mannered, responsible, and hardworking are more likely to be far more successful in the

job

market, and employers place a premium on

this

workforce. To conclude, I agree that having a satisfactory

job

requires academic qualifications, practical skills as well as productive qualities.