It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue?

Presently,
Tourism
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industry
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booming at a very faster pace
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all over the world and it generates a lot of income. It is assumed that the unacceptable behaviour of visitors on tourist spot can be
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detrimental
for
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tourism
industry. In the forthcoming paragraphs will discuss what are the reasons behind it and
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possible
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solution with my own knowledge. To commence with, the main
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mind that, some times people get cheated by
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agent as they
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project
big picture of
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place in the mind of tourists and they get
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by it. As people do not find
such
facilities or lack of facilities
such
as accommodation,
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, meals, and many more. They get annoyed by paying
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amount
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to
travel
agents.
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, they through out their
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frustration
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frustration
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the tourist place, which ultimately
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on
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the tourism sector To cope
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with
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, government authorities should take
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disciplinary action against those
travel
agencies
which are deteriorating the image of
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tourism
and the license of these
deceiveable
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deceivable
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travel
agencies
should be barred.
Moreover
, travellers who are cheated by
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fake
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should take the help of social media like
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Instagram
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by posting about deceptive
travel
agencies
.
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could know what is wrong and right. To conclude, tourism is a vital
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sector of a nation as it generates
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tonnes
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of income. While, few people and
agencies
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the
travelers
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, by taking proper action by government and
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tourists
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iteself
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itself
this
issue can be resolved.
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