It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue?

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Tourism

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industry

are

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booming at a very faster pace

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all over the world and it generates a lot of income. It is assumed that the unacceptable behaviour of visitors on tourist spot can be

deterimental

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detrimental

for

tousrim

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tourism

industry. In the forthcoming paragraphs will discuss what are the reasons behind it and

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possible

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solution with my own knowledge. To commence with, the main

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mind that, some times people get cheated by

travel

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agent as they

peoject

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big picture of

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place in the mind of tourists and they get

persued

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by it. As people do not find

such

facilities or lack of facilities

such

as accommodation,

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, meals, and many more. They get annoyed by paying

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amount

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travel

agents.

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, they through out their

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frustration

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frustration

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the tourist place, which ultimately

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the tourism sector To cope

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with

situation

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, government authorities should take

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disciplinary action against those

travel

agencies

which are deteriorating the image of

toursim

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tourism

and the license of these

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travel

agencies

should be barred.

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should take the help of social media like

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Instagram

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and Instagarm

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by posting about deceptive

travel

agencies

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could know what is wrong and right. To conclude, tourism is a vital

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sector of a nation as it generates

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tonnes

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of income. While, few people and

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for the sake of minting money cheat

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the

travelers

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, by taking proper action by government and

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iteself

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this

issue can be resolved.

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Word repetition
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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265 words

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It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. •Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. •Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

Many people argue that the average age of drinking should be above the current set age. Others think it should be above the individual and shouldn’t be based on the factor of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter: describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?