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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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There is no doubt that technology plays an important role in education nowadays. Schools and universities begin to use new teaching tools
instead
 of a traditional method which is in-class
lecture
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 among many
students
. In
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 passage, the advantages and disadvantages will be discussed. Focusing on the disadvantages, the main negative effect is interpersonal relationships between
students
. In the past,
students
 must attend lectures at their schools and
this
 way of teaching allows
students
 to communicate
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 each other face-to-face.
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 to new teaching
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such
 as online
lecture
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,
students
 have less chance to interact with
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 other and it weakens their bonds
as a result
.
In addition
, online learning can affect their mental state in a negative way because of loneliness and anxiety.
On the other hand
,
technology
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 significantly
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students
’ learning productivity. There are various tools that make
students
 more
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 to learn and review their lessons.
For example
, in
Zoom
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 application, lecturers are able to record their
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 and upload videos to online platforms. For
this
 reason,
students
 who don’t clearly understand the lesson while attending live class can review that chapter by watching lecture videos again and
this
 will not possible if traditional ways of teaching are used.
Furthermore
, because of online learning,
students
 will have more time to review their
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 at home
instead
 of wasting their time in the traffic. In conclusion,
although
 there are some disadvantages of
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students
’ bonds and mental state, they do not supersede the benefit as it leads to effective learning way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Multimedia content
  • Automated grading
  • Global collaboration
  • Critical thinking
  • Personalized learning
  • Digital divide
  • Interactive software
  • E-learning platforms
  • Virtual classrooms
  • Technological literacy
  • Distance education
  • Digital resources
  • Cybersecurity concerns
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Pedagogical approaches
  • Disruption in education
  • Innovative teaching methods
  • Accessibility features
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