An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping on line.
In
this
recent time
, due to the burgeoning of technology majority of individuals are using the internet, as a way to buy things that they need. In this
essay, I will discuss the merits and drawbacks of online shopping to the consumers and also
to the producers.
To commence with, the internet becomes a necessity to
people in every part of the world because it can be Change preposition
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convenient
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is convenient
That is
why shopping online is one of the trends globally. For instance
, during this
time
of pandemic
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people
are terrified to get the Add an article
the people
corona virus
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coronavirus
Hence
, they are choosing to do shopping online for foods and other products that they need. As a result
, they save time
, energy
and more safe than Correct word choice
and energy
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companies have benefits Correct article usage
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that because they just need to promote their products by posting online to get more possible new clients.
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On the other hand
, one of the drawbacks of buying online is that the quality of the products cannot be check
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for
the reason that the information Change preposition
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are
not all Change the verb form
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mentioned
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Therefore
, consumers can only check the items once it was delivered. Moreover
, if the buyers have bulk orders, there are instances of missing items. Thus
, the consumer needs to complain to the stores and it will takes
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time
again after they can deliver it.
In my conclusion, online shopping is trending nowadays because it is convenient to use and save
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saves
times
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time
to
numerous people. Change preposition
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However
, it can also
have disadvantages like the quality check cannot be done online and needs to complain to the companies if have any missing items that will be hussle
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