An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping on line.

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, due to the burgeoning of technology majority of individuals are using the internet, as a way to buy things that they need. In

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essay, I will discuss the merits and drawbacks of online shopping to the consumers and

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to the producers. To commence with, the internet becomes a necessity

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people in every part of the world because it can be

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anywhere and

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to use.

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why shopping online is one of the trends globally.

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are terrified to get the

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, they are choosing to do shopping online for foods and other products that they need.

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, they save

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and more safe than

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outside. While

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companies have benefits

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that because they just need to promote their products by posting online to get more possible new clients.

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, one of the drawbacks of buying online is that the quality of the products cannot be

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not all

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their websites.

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, consumers can only check the items once it was delivered.

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, if the buyers have bulk orders, there are instances of missing items.

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, the consumer needs to complain to the stores and it will

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again after they can deliver it. In my conclusion, online shopping is trending nowadays because it is convenient to use and

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numerous people.

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have disadvantages like the quality check cannot be done online and needs to complain to the companies if have any missing items that will be

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to the consumers.