In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the modern century, people would like to eat

such

as fast food and

cold

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drink

, but it will harmful to our life. several manufacturing industries are producing many products with high

sugar

content, which is unhealthy for humankind.

However

, the government should increase the price of

sugar

. I strongly agree with

this

statement and I will discuss it in the upcoming paragraph.

To begin

with, during the summer season, the productivity of cold

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is escalate, and we know

about

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that cold

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that cold drink product

those cold drink products

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drink

products

such

as

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Coca-Cola, sprite, as well as, Pepsi they are added high amount of

sugar

ratio.

However

, it will harmful

for

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our health.

For example

, diabetes is one of the dangerous

disease

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which is come from

the

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sweet things like chocolate, cold

drink

and many more.

Therefore

, we can die before our age.

Hence

, the government must increase the cost of

sugar

so that community does not bring

this

product and protect themselves

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the harmful disease.

In addition

,

sugar

content is

also

the worst effect on our bones.

This

content

are decrease

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our

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density of our bones.

For instance

, in the 21st century, several people feel exhausted when they walk only

the

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few distances.

As a result

, we cannot live

healthy

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and we have to face many problems.

Moreover

, if we had

took

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more

sugar

during

the

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younger age so that after 40 to 42 years, we cannot able to carry on

of

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heavy products.

Hence

,

these high amount

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of

sugar

will create

the

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unhealthy life. For

those reason

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, the government should grow up the price of

sugar

. If the

sugar

will

expensive

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than

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then

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less

number of

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product sales in the market and it will beneficial for society. To conclude, a high amount of sweets can be harmful to our body.

This

sugar

produces bacteria and it is the reason for disease.

Hence

, the price of Fast Food and

drink

must climb up so that less consumption by the customer.