In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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as fast food and

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, but it will harmful to our life. several manufacturing industries are producing many products with high

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content, which is unhealthy for humankind.

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, the government should increase the price of

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. I strongly agree with

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statement and I will discuss it in the upcoming paragraph.

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with, during the summer season, the productivity of cold

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drink

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is escalate, and we know

about

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that cold

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that cold drink product

those cold drink products

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drink

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products

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as

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Coca-Cola, sprite, as well as, Pepsi they are added high amount of

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ratio.

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, it will harmful

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our health.

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, diabetes is one of the dangerous

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which is come from

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sweet things like chocolate, cold

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and many more.

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, we can die before our age.

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, the government must increase the cost of

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so that community does not bring

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product and protect themselves

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the harmful disease.

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,

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content is

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the worst effect on our bones.

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content

are decrease

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our

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density of our bones.

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, in the 21st century, several people feel exhausted when they walk only

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few distances.

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, we cannot live

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and we have to face many problems.

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, if we had

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more

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during

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younger age so that after 40 to 42 years, we cannot able to carry on

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heavy products.

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,

these high amount

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of

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will create

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unhealthy life. For

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that reason

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, the government should grow up the price of

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. If the

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will

expensive

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than

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less

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product sales in the market and it will beneficial for society. To conclude, a high amount of sweets can be harmful to our body.

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sugar

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produces bacteria and it is the reason for disease.

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, the price of Fast Food and

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must climb up so that less consumption by the customer.