The detailed description about crime will affect the people and will cause many social problems. Some people say that media should be strictly controlled. Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that in detail broadcasts of criminal
activities
will adversely impact the mass community which, in turn, lead to various social issues. It is believed that a wide broadcast should be restricted, while others feel that it should not.
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essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will provide an overall opinion. Generally speaking, there are many reasons that the media should be restricted. The main important reason behind it is that it will increase criminal
activities
as people tend to mimic these ideas. A good illustration of
this
can be a subsequent increase in theft, robbery, and even murders in a similar way. Another important reason
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is that it
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some disrespectful
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among youngsters as they tend to adopt some inappropriate
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from a TV program, say
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between young and old, disobedience, and so on.
On the other hand
, others believe that the public broadcast should be as it is.
Firstly
, they think that a clear depiction of an unusual circumstance
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to help
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event in future. If a person knows how to prevent a specific crime, he would avoid
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repetition.
Secondly
, the concerned authority can easily drop down an unjustified action, say smuggling if they know how exactly it happens.
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, several inter-related social issues,
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as drug addiction among youngsters can
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out. All things considered, a clear occurrence of
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event in visual form by mass media should be controlled as it
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criminal
activities
as well as inappropriate
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. While some
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think that it should be uninterrupted because it prevents similar
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consequent proportion. I prefer a crystal clear visualization of a crime event from the media perspective.
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