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You were recently helped by an employee at the airport, write to the airport to -describe the problem -Talk about how you were helped -Suggest how to reward the employee

#employee #airport #-describe #-talk #-suggest #reward
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to appreciate the services of
Mr.
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 John Henry, manager
public
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relation
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 at Brisbane airport terminal 2 when I was struggling with my luggage receiving issue. At the onset, when I deboarded at the airport at 12 am from Indigo London Flight number p7929 with booking number c262992, I found my bag was not on the conveyor belt. As there were few staff available, I was so scared and I met with
Mr.
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 John at the customer care. Not only did he offer water for me to make me relaxed, but he
also
 assisted me in filling out the form
of
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 recovery of my luggage which was stuck somewhere at the back end.
Thus
, I cannot have words for the splendid customer handling skill of
Mr.
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 John so I want you to flash his name along with a picture on the recognition board as well as on the main display near both main gates.
In addition
, I request you to deliver him the $150 cheque that I have enclosed with
this
 letter
especially
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 in front of your entire staff with an appreciation letter. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Harry
Brownsugar
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Brown sugar
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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