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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

Write a letter

Dear Sir or Madam,
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I am
I'm
Iam
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I am
 writing in response
of
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to
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 your advertisement. I would like to do the unpaid
work
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 ,I just finished training, as a caregiver. So I thought
this
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 will be
the
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a
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 good starting point for me to learn more in the hospital industry,and again
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a lot
alot
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a lot
 of experience. As you know in our country things are very hard so I would like to go
work
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 overseas.l need a good reference. I would be able to
work
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 as a caregiver ,at our local hospital helping old people
in
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with
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 bathing, washing
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their
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they
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the
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 clothes, feeding them cooking food and many more ,training them to walk .I want to build confidence and skills, I don't regret taking the unpaid
work
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. I will be available every day from Monday to Sunday, from 08:00 to.16:00, you can call me any time in if you need me ,my contact no is 0810572975, in case you have pressure at the hospital. I look forward to your reply Yours sincerely Fortune Mutale.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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