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Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am

I'm

Iam

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I am

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your advertisement. I would like to do the unpaid

work

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,I just finished training, as a caregiver. So I thought

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will be

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good starting point for me to learn more in the hospital industry,and again

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a lot

alot

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a lot

of experience. As you know in our country things are very hard so I would like to go

work

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overseas.l need a good reference. I would be able to

work

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as a caregiver ,at our local hospital helping old people

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with

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bathing, washing

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their

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they

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clothes, feeding them cooking food and many more ,training them to walk .I want to build confidence and skills, I don't regret taking the unpaid

work

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. I will be available every day from Monday to Sunday, from 08:00 to.16:00, you can call me any time in if you need me ,my contact no is 0810572975, in case you have pressure at the hospital. I look forward to your reply Yours sincerely Fortune Mutale.

marthandlovu

Jun 16, 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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The Greeting

Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable school time.

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the view?

Many businesses think that the new employees who have just graduated from schools lack interpersonal skills, such as working with colleagues as a team. What has caused this and what are the solutions to this problem?

Nowadays many ppl choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?