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Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am

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I am

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your advertisement. I would like to do the unpaid

work

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,I just finished training, as a caregiver. So I thought

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good starting point for me to learn more in the hospital industry,and again

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a lot

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a lot

of experience. As you know in our country things are very hard so I would like to go

work

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overseas.l need a good reference. I would be able to

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as a caregiver ,at our local hospital helping old people

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bathing, washing

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they

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clothes, feeding them cooking food and many more ,training them to walk .I want to build confidence and skills, I don't regret taking the unpaid

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. I will be available every day from Monday to Sunday, from 08:00 to.16:00, you can call me any time in if you need me ,my contact no is 0810572975, in case you have pressure at the hospital. I look forward to your reply Yours sincerely Fortune Mutale.

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Jun 16, 2022

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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164 words

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The Greeting

In many countries in the world, some people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this good for a country. Others think that the government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays some high-school graduates travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Advantages and Disadvantages of Large-Scale Festivals