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Iam
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writing in response
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your advertisement. I would like to do the unpaid
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,I just finished training, as a caregiver. So I thought
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good starting point for me to learn more in the hospital industry,and again
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of experience. As you know in our country things are very hard so I would like to go
work
overseas.l need a good reference. I would be able to
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as a caregiver ,at our local hospital helping old people
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bathing, washing
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they
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clothes, feeding them cooking food and many more ,training them to walk .I want to build confidence and skills, I don't regret taking the unpaid
work
. I will be available every day from Monday to Sunday, from 08:00 to.16:00, you can call me any time in if you need me ,my contact no is 0810572975, in case you have pressure at the hospital. I look forward to your reply Yours sincerely Fortune Mutale.
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The Greeting

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