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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the world.

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 the globe depends on
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tourism as a main source of revenue. It is commonly believed that it can
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 origin of problems if it is not maintained well. In my point of view,
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 of touristry outweigh its disadvantages.
However
, I shall discuss both notions along with a rational conclusion. To commence with, tourism is a rapidly growing industry in the world because it has numerous benefits and enormous places to visit across the globe. One of the main
advantage
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 of
this
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it
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 creates a lot of job
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opportunities
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 and generates
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 economy
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 to the country.
Additionally
, travellers are being spent millions of dollars on holidays, and many countries depend on
this
 income as a part of their national economic system.
Hence
, to attract tourists, hospitality companies are
also
 being invested in campaigns to get awareness
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 destinations. One clear example is that
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economy
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 from tourism is over 30% of GDP in the world.
Secondly
, travelling lovers can know about the different cultures,
traditions
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and traditions
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 around the globe.
On the other hand
, touristry has
drwabacks
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drawbacks
 like traffic congestion and pollution. In fact, a lot of people club at one place like shopping complexes and food markets
then
 automatically traffic would be created.
Moreover
, there is a chance of increasing plastic
such
 as bottles and boxes.
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 through the disposable items on the roads
then
 that area would be polluted.
Therefore
, the Government should take the
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responsibility
responsibilty
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responsibility
 to maintain
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cleanliness
cleaniness
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cleanliness
 in the travelling places. To sum up, every
nation
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 development mainly
rely
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 on the touristry so income would be generated
then
 it will be helpful to our ecosystem.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • hospitality industry
  • tourist influx
  • cultural commodification
  • ecological footprint
  • economic diversification
  • carrying capacity
  • cultural sensitivity
  • destination marketing
  • travel advisories
  • visitor management
  • impact assessment
  • tourism revenues
  • authentic experience
  • visitor satisfaction
  • conservation efforts
  • seasonal fluctuation
  • social sustainability
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