In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the
last
two or three decades, people are being fascinated
towards
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education.
However
, in
this
globalized world, it is commonly believed that everybody is having equal choices
to
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be educated.
Hence
, Organisations should opine balanced numbers of men and women in every
subject
. In my point of view, I completely
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disagree
agree
diagree
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disagree
with
this
statement because population statistics and explained
further
.
First
of all, according to statistics
of
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gender in the world, men
is
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higher than women.
Moreover
, as per World Health Organization, the ratio is 1.25:1 which means that 4.5
billions
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male and 3
billions
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billion
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of
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female
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are there.
Hence
, it is not possible to be
equal
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number of students in the
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classroom
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class-room
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classroom
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. One clear example is that, if a university
have
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2000 admissions
then
to accept
equal
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number of genders, it is not balanced as per the population history.
On the other hand
, everybody does not have
equal
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interest
in each
subject
. Because
,
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some girls have
facinated
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fascinated
towards arts and others may have
interest
in science.
Therefore
, it is difficult to get equal registrations in every
subject
.
For instance
, more youngsters are being had
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interest
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in civil engineering and mechanical engineering while women have
interest
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in computer science and information technology.
Thus
, universities should not force them to join other
subjec
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subject
rather than their
interest
. To sum up, as per the statistics and
interest
Government should consider their focus rather than equality. I believe that, if they take another
subject
then
students may constantly
feeling
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under pressure.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Equal opportunities
  • Gender equality
  • Stereotypes
  • Diverse
  • Gender disparity
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
  • Humanities
  • Quotas
  • Reverse discrimination
  • Meritocracy
  • Tokenism
  • Workforce
  • Leadership roles
  • Aptitude-based
  • Scholarships
  • Economic growth
  • Innovation
  • Social stability
  • Comparative analysis
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