*In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.* To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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technology, Media concept e.g movies and photography has been the most effective method of conveying information rather than
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memory in the audience and it can be easily applied.
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journals and brochures as these consumed most of
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time.
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both young and old, elites and illiterates can easily comprehend
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messages that were illustrated via media aid,
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deadly virus,HIV/AIDS and the audience were able to understand the disease process, it's
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of transmission and preventive measures.
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may claim that written documents can be preserved for reference
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, unlike photography and images that are perishable.Still,the usefulness of illustrative materials
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positive impact on the subject matter,even if films were deleted the memory will still be fresh in the mind of the viewers. To sum it up,movie skits
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slides
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helped in passing information across in
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and when other communication means
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effectiveness,it will remain
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potency because imaging info goes along with fun.
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